Recount Writing-At the beach

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At the beach
On Saturday morning I went to the beach in Whangarei with my sister and dad to have a swim. First we had a swim. The water was cold. “Brrrr.” I said. I went out of the water. Next we were making sand castles. It was fun. To make a sand castle you need a bucket shaped like a castle then put sand in the bucket. When I tipped the bucket over the sand was shaped like a sand castle. Then I put some big shells around the sand castle. My sand castle looked beautiful.