WALT: Use Powerful Adjectives.
Words I know:
Terrified
Marvellous
Delightful
Shaken
Menacing
Magnificent
Absurd
Pathetic
Words I don't know:
Astonished
Flabbergasted
Exquisite
Appalled
Distraught
Abysmal
Eccentric
Dangle
One day I went outside in the snowy hills wearing a winter coat.
I played in the park in the foggy winter landscape. When I stopped playing I started to have a little stroll before I went home.
Suddenly I came across a long golden string. When I saw it I then pulled it to reveal it’s presents. When I pulled it I was on the moon. I paused. I knew I was running out of oxygen so I pulled it again. Suddenly I was standing in the sun. My feet were blazing hot because of the menacing heat. So I pulled it again. Now I was in a colosseum. It was very crowded there but I did not want to see them battling to the death. so I pulled the string again. Then I was right under an umbrella. I was at a beach, I was flabbergasted. Then I decided to stop pulling the string so I just layed down in the blazing magnificent hot sand.
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