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25.07.18
At the park
On a sunny Sunday morning me and Tumanako
went to the park in Waima with my friend and my dad.
went to the park in Waima with my friend and my dad.
At the park me and my friend went down the slide.
It was fast. Then we went to the swings. Dad pushed me first.
I was going high. “Yay! This is fun,” I said.
It was fast. Then we went to the swings. Dad pushed me first.
I was going high. “Yay! This is fun,” I said.
After that we went to the monkey bars.
We climbed on the monkey bars. They were high.
I was swinging from bar to bar. It was fun.
We climbed on the monkey bars. They were high.
I was swinging from bar to bar. It was fun.
Next we had a picnic. We had sandwiches and fruit.
My day at the park was amazing.
