I am a year 4 learner at Tautoro School in Northland, New Zealand. I am room 3 and my teacher is Whaea Rosina.
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Kia ora Peehikuru, I liked how you used adjectives and commas. This helps bring your story to life. Have you thought about using plurals in your writing? Only because we have been learning about them. A great story, with cool imagination. Ka pai.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Peehikuru, I liked how you used adjectives and commas. This helps bring your story to life. Have you thought about using plurals in your writing? Only because we have been learning about them. A great story, with cool imagination. Ka pai.
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